The Angels cry
The Predators fly
In the sleepless night
Where we quiver in fright
All is Lost, All is lost
And the angels cry
All is lost
Tears fall
The angels call
Lost within,
The fight begins
All is lost, All is lost
And the angels cry
All is lost
The storm churns
The fire burns
The child, dead and gone
But the fight carries on
All is lost, All is lost
And the angels cry
All is lost
Hopes lay dead
Filled with dread
Carry on the fight,
On through the night
All is lost, All is lost
And the angels cry
All is lost
Sit alone
Still so prone,
And the angels cry out,
For all is lost
A contest entry
- Help me finish what I started please!!!! by Angel of Musik.
375 points, ended May 5, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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is dread you favorite word
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excellent....it seemed to be set at a fast pace, and it pumped some adreniline
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Loved it
this is good, i love angels and poems about them but this has more meaning than just the angels -
Lovely!! This is very well done, thank you.
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Beautiful...
I loved the repetition used here...wonderful job honey!!!
Good luck in the contest!!!
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