Rage
Pick up a chair
Throw it through a wall
Damage is done
Wake
In the white room
For going insane
For being angry
Trapped
In a padded room
In straight jackets
Trapped, alone
Raging
Author notes
Triple Haiku, unofficial, but its one of the hardest types to preform. I am unsure if i did it right.
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A contest entry
- All Great Poets are Dead and Crazy by alexandrathegreat.
800 points, ended September 1, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a version of haiku I am unfamiliar with, but it works really well with the subject matter and the story and images you have chosen to show.
Good write.
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Nice poetic weapons my friend! Though I don't see how this relates to the quotes much, I enjoyed it thoroughly, thank you for entering in my contest!
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ah, the economy in word usage favors you. you've wonderfully condensed all the emotions so well.everything is so poignant.
it's great. you do well with few words. everything is so much more powerful.
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