I SUPPOSE I’M OPPOSED;TO THOSE WHO PROPOSE:
“THAT THINGS ARE APPROS’TO THEM IN THE KNOW”;
THAT’S NOT HOW I SEE IT, THEN AGAIN LET’S SAY WHEN-
THEY ASCEND TO A HIGHER PLANE(OF THINKING)…
COULD IT BE HOW EYES SEE IT? THOUGH THEY DOUBT,
AND THEY POUT, GO ABOUT WITH THINGS THAT HAVE CLOUT
LET’S NOT SHOUT; IN OTHER’S EYE’S THEY DEPISE ,TELLING LIES
THEY DISGUISE THEIR TRUE INTEND;THEIR MONEY’S(INTEGRITY)SPENT!
THAT’S HOW I SEE IT- IN EVERY BIT OF MY HEART RIGHT
FROM THE START ,I CAN FEEL THEY CAN’T MAINTAIN; SO MUCH TO GAIN
IF I REMAIN IN THE GAME(OF LIFE)SO REALIZE THAT THRU MY EYE’S AND
STAY WISE(ONE)…NOW I’M DONE WITH THIS SON,WITH THIS FLOW YO!
YOU KNOW THIS IS “HOW I SEE IT!!”
Author notes
swangrnv( 1st piece ever posted)
A contest entry
- ♠ My First AP poem ♠ by Rebekah-Ann.
525 points, ended May 20, 25 entries
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I chuckled at your use of "all caps". LOL When my business partner came to the site and posted her first poem in a couple of years, (she had left for a few) she posted in all caps and I left her the IM:
"Why are you yelling at us!"
I love the word-play in this poem. I would suggest that you edit and use some small letters. Not until the contest is over though. I need this poem, as it is the first posted to remain as is. Thank you for this entry and I wish you the best in the challenge.
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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Thanks my friend! I appreciate your support!
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Lovely poem!
I needed your username to check out your home page, However I think this was really done well for a first attempt. this conetst have been so amazing. To see where people started and where they are now...
Thanks for your entry!
Becks -
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wow,
i'm sorry i never knew u commented? l.o.l. i feel stupid after all this time! anyways, thanks so much my friend!
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Oh'TaY...
I liked the flow on this one son!!!!! I Think you could have left a small piece out, but only because i think it didn't flow 'for me' with the rest of your "flow yo"...lol! However, your piece was very, very smooooooooooooth! Loved it!
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