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The Fault Is Our Own

I realize now
How much life is flawed
After all this pain
That love has caused

Supposedly one of the
Purest things
Yet look at all
The pain it brings

We say we love, yet cheat
For reasons unknown
We cause the flaws
The fault is out own

How can we cause
so much pain with our words
In the end how much
Are our apologies worth

We lie and cheat
Then make-up and repeat
Creating a circle
Of unending deceit

We do this until
The truth is lost, unknown
We cause the flaws
The fault is our own

Building a relationship
On unworthy trust
Living unable
To do what we must

If love is false
Then it causes this pain
If not they’re alike
They both feel the same

To those who have felt this
This pain is well-known
We cause these flaws
The fault is our own

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  • ShadowDemonWolfQuee
    May 15, 2007
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    wow

    im impressed with ur poems, so far all of them are great, i think ill hae to read more


  • roses and thorns
    May 5, 2007

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    wow

    I was so impressed! this is so good! You have a couple spelling things, but other than that you did an awesome job of portraying love and its flaws.

    ~roses


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    May 4, 2007

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    Awww...

    Honey this is true!!! Love does have its mysterious ways....which makes us give up on it more often than not....


    on such an emotional and well-thought poem...