I had to go to the toilet one day
i rushed, and rushed, and RUSHED...
it was locked
and I fell down
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and under ONLY --- Prewrite Heaven 2 by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended May 23, 2007, 15 entries
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haha this is a funny poem! So, you fell down? that stinks! well anyway, better luck next time!
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Lol. That's quite a depressing story there. Tragically realistic.
Keep writing!
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hahahah here's a funny and cute one that i didn't read before
i just had a really good laugh after reading this. yup same thing happened but didn't fall down...while i was running i tripped and that was the closest
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:O :)) Cute!
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I just had to laugh at this poem. I can remember having days like this except I don't remember falling down
Thanks for entering and good luck!
Blessings
celticmoon
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lol this made me laugh i can imagine that happening
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i did that one day on the beach with mummy. i really neededd to go and i ran in the door and fell over. this one made me laugh.
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