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Feelings {for me from Charles Lewis}

I'm at a loss as where to start,
so I close my eyes and open my heart.
An overwhelming feeling deep within,
so I reckon it's here that I must begin.

I'm in awe of your beauty and grace,
a stirring emotion as I see your face.
It's then that I want to take y ou by the hand,
show you the wonders and be your man.

I only know that I miss you so much,
a yearning for your soft, gentle touch.
What was a flicker is now a flame,
I accept that my life will not be the same.

now the glame is a raging fire,
deep emotions of hunger and desire.
Wanting to end this worldly sorrow,
I await for you and our tomorrow.

Charles Lewis
4-20-07

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  • dixiebme
    June 9, 2007
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    Very nice write! Some men can be very romantic and you are one of them.


  • Musimwa
    May 31, 2007

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    thank u for sharing such a wonderful poem. I love its depth expressing all the strong emotions a heart can carry. Keep this up dear poet and friend. Good day


  • ButterflyforChrist
    May 3, 2007
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    Beautiful! Charles sure does have a way with words. This is wonderful! =)


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 3, 2007
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    Do you inspire everyone you know to write? A good read. Thank you for sharing.