Come Dance With Me

Come dance with me
in moonlit skies
as stardust falls upon our hearts

Twinkling with pleasure
our bodies embrace;
Pressing my blush upon your lips

Capture my soul
as it leaps from a kiss
upon your eyes that smile
Transcend with me
into fantasies
on wings of prayers tonight

True love has feathers of purity
tickling a playful song
Awaken your spirit
come rise with me,
in rhythm of love
we shall fly

Come dance with me~

Tonight

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Contest Picture Inspired, 30 lines or less Freeverse ~Adult by mysticstorm. 475 points, ended June 14, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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mysticstorm
January 28
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Verified your Gold! You can now remove and write for the contest.

Thank you!
InBetweenThoughts
May 4, 2007

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I'll be right over Darlin, hold that thought! Excellent poem smooth flowing, great pic! My wings are ready, lol...beautiful poem, great imagery..good luck with this in the contest...as my brother say," Smooooooooooooookin! Have a beautiful day, Ken IBT
poet2angels
May 4, 2007

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beautiful
Sensual and done with such tasteful language...
So lovely this is!
A sweet dream for two....

Lynda
mysticstorm
May 4, 2007

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Great! So very romantic, yet sensual. Strong write that holds it's owm very well.
Love the word choice and soft flow.
Excellent.
Thank you for entering!
- jasminerose
  May 5, 2007
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  Thank you!
  Ahhh.. well now that the contest is over and I can reveal who I am to you I just wanted to say thank you so very much for your beautiful compliment and I am so delighted that you enjoyed this so that you felt it was worthy of a Gold! Gosh, Mysticstorm.. I am smiling so much right now.. thank you!!
  Jasminerose
UrbaN PlaguE
May 3, 2007

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Wow. Very romantic piece. B-U-T-FUL. "as stardust falls upon our hearts" what a great line?? It made my heart rise in my chest great job! Good luck in your contest.

Josh
Luna Tique Fringe
May 3, 2007

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WooHoo...Sexy sweet, sooo romantic. I love this line "Capture my soul,as it leaps from a kiss" Imaginitive!! Good luck
Dragon Tamer
May 3, 2007

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Smooooooooking!!!
This is a very enticing poem I think lines like this would work any guy up to go dance out on the floor You have done the picture justice with your poem Thank you for sharing such a smooooooooking hot piece with us and best of luck to you in the contest.
Don
Heavenly Angel
May 3, 2007

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Most wonderfully and beautifully sensual, my friend! Sigh...
I loved every line! Wish you all the best in this contest!!!