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Goddess Of Day Old Bread - HM

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she was stick thin,
a bird’s nest bobble of braids
brought together with beads
of hawk-eye colors

sitting on pavement’s crumbled ledge
prying stones from her knees
from a half-drunken sprawl

from a huddle over homemade hearth,
leaning over a fire,  a murder
of marauding homeless men
came a holler:

“Hey, Goddess, cummmmereeeeeeeee,
you got sumpthin’ sweet
to make a man forget his hunger?”
hooted an owl-eyed oily object
of her run in the first place.

a baker, throwing scraps
for slandered seagulls, cast a cruel glance
at someone’s disgraced daughter
and wondered if a guy
might hurt himself on those bones

she slicked a look at all of them,
knew hard labor of hunger,
took on closest resemblance to lady
she could muster, swallowing her pride
for price of a piece of day old bread

she was stork-looking,
bent in all shapes of sorrow,
but determined never to go home

there has to be a reason
sparrow stands its ground
to swallow bits of gravel
on busy road

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  • JM Kenyon silver member
    May 10, 2007
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    she was stork-looking, bent in all shapes of sorrow, but determined never to go home excellent write, I liked the way the topic unfolded without the crude tones I see so often. Very well written piece! *hug*s and best wishes always... ~Genie~


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      May 11, 2007
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      ty, sooften they are maligned, without realizing it is all they can do at that moment, their way.