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Sweet Darling

Alone and Afriad
I reach out to you
And I can't close my eyes
Afraid that you'll fall through
So I hold on so tightly
And cry out your name
Help me sweet darling
Without you I'm not the same
Tell me sweet darling
Love me till the end of time
Whisper sweet nothings
Tell me you'll always be mine.

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Another one for my love, these poems I'm writing lately suck, but I don't care. They show how I feel. <3

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  • GhostlyOctoberRose
    June 9, 2007
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    :O momma

    YAY MOMMA


  • Cynner Aven
    June 1, 2007
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    Always...

    Hi love, guess what? I will always be your...


  • ThatColinKid
    May 4, 2007

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    Nice, It has alot of feeling in it, I can relate to it really...I miss my Emily...But nows not the time for that. Lovely write, I find it very moving.

  • Onerogueleft
    May 3, 2007
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    They do not suck to me at all

    I know how your words feel all to well. I myself miss my sweetheart and long for her touch, and to be assured that we are soul mates, and belong together. Thanks for the thought inspiring read fellow poet.

  • Onerogueleft
    May 3, 2007

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    They do not suck to me at all

    I know how your words feel all to well. I myself miss my sweetheart and long for her touch, and to be assured that we are soul mates, and belong together. Thanks for the thought inspiring read fellow poet.

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