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The Buddleia

A hummingbird a little green body shimmers on a buddliea.
It passed by so quickly.
I sighted its perch luckily.
A wonderful delight
This rarity in my sight
Butterflies have been attracted to the beautiful purple flowers.
The creatures came to the buddleia that has magical powers

A contest entry

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  • darkscorpia
    May 16
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    This is a very pretty poem. I love how you use "buddliea" its such a unique word.
    Line 1- I would hit 'enter' and make "A humming bird" and "A little green body..." seperate lines.
    Line 7- Could use some revision maybe "The creatures came to the buddleia/A flower with magical powers
    Line 8- Delete

  • Mercury Rising
    May 16

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    This is really a beautiful little poem. For some reason, the word Buddleia made ne think of Buddha. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Simply Olivia
    July 4, 2008
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    I wish that I could see this!