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let tears rain from thine eyes...








like the first raindrop to hit the ground
a single tears drips to the floor
the violent clouds twist and turn
and it begins to pour











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  • fairytalelovestory
    October 14, 2008
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    Ty for entering and good luck
    Amazing poetry


  • ShadowsOfControl
    May 24, 2007
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    Truthful

    I love this...It reminds me of when I break down


  • Lj-
    May 3, 2007
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    This is good. The rhyme was a nice touch.

    Thank you for entering,
    Best of luck.