It’s not easy to look upon your eyes
When I know that’s where your sorrow lies
You open your heart to the one you desire
Even though he seems to make you a liar
And makes you so much more in your eyes.
A slut, a whore, and so much more
These things are what you seem to be
At least that is what you believe.
I want you to know what I see
When I dare to look upon your eyes.
You are a girl who loves a boy
This you hate to admit.
You are a warrior with a broken sword
Living on a wish to die.
You are a flower broken and dead
Only wanting love.
You are so many things and so much more.
You are the deceived in his little game
He is the spider
You are the moth
He has trapped you
And gotten you alone
But fly away
With all your might
Because he is not your fate.
Walk away because you don’t need him
He belittles you when you are already down
He loves you when he has you alone
He loves her with everybody else
You cry tears that nobody can see
Because emotionally he makes you fall.
You need to stop loving him
I know that it will be oh so hard
But when you learn to stop
He may stop and begin to think
Of what he has lost and what you have gained
Author notes
Dear Katie...=)
I don't like ham, it makes me sad, but I do like green eggs and no Ham...But I love Bacon!
I also love you! lol
Love Midorirain
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Comments
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it made me cry, again, as always, tears for real tears... thought you ought to know, my last comment didn't do it justice, this is beautiful Julie
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This piece is.... VERY well written!
I really like the use of... words... lol
This poem hits uncomfortably close to home!
Good luck in my..... *snore*
I hope that yo... *snore*
lol!!
~Katie
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Another great poem from you!! So many lines I like here but one that sticks out for me is "You're a warrior with a broken sword" Keep Writing!!
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