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Enter My Life

The gate of my heart
has long been opened
for you to enter,
walking on a red carpet.
Welcome to my solitary
life that is longing for
the hands of someone
like you. Open the door and
never mind if you get
the rags soiled for your
feet are more precious. Feel
comfortable as you sit
on my warm sofa. Go
on, flip some magazines and
old photographs. You can
turn on the television. Or won’t
you like watching a movie?
What can I offer you?
Juice? Tea? Cola? Wine?

Love?

Feel at home.

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  • eyesofanangel524
    May 3, 2007

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    I love this. So real, so comforting, so welcoming. I do so hope you find the one who will wander in and take their place among the stars with you. I love the first two lines. Well done...and best of luck to you..Dawn