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Don't Mind This

I used to be your companion
just a friend

I smiled at you;
you wouldn’t mind

You pat my back;
you wouldn’t mind

I always hugged you;
you wouldn’t mind

You loved ticking me;
you wouldn’t mind

I caressed your hands;
you wouldn’t mind

You cried on me;
you wouldn’t mind

Now that I love you
not just a friend

I hope you won’t mind.


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  • heygoo
    May 3, 2007

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    When a friendship grows into love it can be scary ground. What a strong love, though, if it is reciprocated.


  • darkwriter24
    May 3, 2007
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    AWWWWWWW! So sweet! This definately shows lots of emotion and the fear of hoping that you are not in love with someone who doesn't love you back! Very sweet and it touched me. The lines I like the most:

    You cried on me;
    you wouldn’t mind

    Now that I love you
    not just a friend

    I hope you won’t mind.

    Great Work!