Heels
When I first saw her
it was love at first site,
She asked me to dance,
and I said it was all right,
I played it real cool
like it was no big deal.
but, I was staring at her mini
and those come f**k me heels
We dated for a while
and I tried to ring her bell,
she looked at me said
“I don’t wanna go to hell.”
“I’m savin it for marriage,
can you respect the way I feel.”
I said “then why the hell, you wearin
those come f**K me high heels.”
I took her home to mama.
Told her dress real nice.
She wore a high neck shirt
and she really talked polite.
She said “baby don’t worry
cause you know, I know the deal..”
But damn it she was wearin
those come f**K me high heels.
I took her out to Bali
on our wedding night.
She looked so good
and it felt so right.
She came into the bedroom,
I said “pinch me is this real,”
Cause all my baby’s wearin
are her come f**k me heels.
Patricia Gibson-Little
Author notes
I wrote this a long time ago an just happend to come across it. It seems like I've heard a song something like this, but not quite the same. (at least I really hope not) If anyone knows what it is let me know.
Patti
Written July 24th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Soemthing Naugty by 1star.
250 points, ended July 25, 2003, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Cool! This is such a great poem. I love it. Plenty of chuckles and sex, what a great combination.
Marcellus -
I like the tone of this the best. It's sorta sexy the way the guy keeps being jazzed by those high heels all the time. It's fab, it's excellent, and good luck on the contest!
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this is a very cool poem. loved the way you put it together, and the flow was great.....
She came into the bedroom,
I said “pinch me is this real,”
Cause all my baby’s wearin
are her come f**k me heels.
gotta love this
great write -
I think this is a really interesting poem, and .. well, I don't think I've ever heard anything quite like it, so as far as I know, you're in the clear! *chuckles*
Women in high heels are very sexy, as we all know, as the heel arches the woman's leg into such a seductive curve, and flexes the muscles just right .. of course, they're a pain in the arse to wear, but it's worth it for the effect they produce .. *chuckles*
This poem had an amazing flow, and in fact, it didn't occur to me until I was writing this that .. "Wow .. that poem rhymed!" .. as a rule I hate rhyming poetry, because it usually has such a simple, childish rhythm, like some sing-song rhyme .. but this poem had fluidity (is that a word) and motion .. it had a rhythm, yes, but not a simple "Roses are red, violets are blue" theme .. with the interlocking themes of the rhyme, and the "come f*** me heels" at the end, you don't even really notice either as a regular part of the poem .. they mesh together beautifully .. this is just a great poem, and I like it the more I think about it! Thank you for writing!
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