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Once upon a fairy tale life

love is a myth
true love is a fairy tale
nothing last forever
except the pain
happiness used to exist
but like love it dissapeared

once upon a fairy tale life
happiness had existed
along with love
a love that was strongley with held
a love only lasting in
laughter, happiness, and smiles

memory's live on
dreams echo
pain renders
blood dripps
tears drizzle
past returns to make believe

love used to be the strongest of all
no matter what happened
the love was alway's there
and it would never go away
pain would go away
mistakes where alway's forgiven

past has passed
myths are lies to unfold
faiy tales are dreams to forget
happiness is long past
the pain is left
with a stained dagger

tears poor
blood will spill
a once happy fairy tale life is dead
memory's become dreams
true love never has existed
and love is only make believe

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  • Tripple-HeadedDevil
    May 30, 2007
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    hmph.

    i really liked this one. its hard to say this, so consider yourself a great writer!