The moment she stood
And walked away
He knew the mistake was his
He stood and watched
He wished she would return to him,
But he didn't speack
The dove aroused and flew
Never to be expected again, but
With time he will see the dove
And watch as the creature changes
With every step further she got
He slowely began to realize
It was his mistake,
That he wont have the chance to fix
And he will never see her again
Over time the dove will visit
And he will gaze deeply into it's eyes
And once again he will see his love
He'll regret the decision he made
He will see her pain,
He will see how she will push herself
He will watch as she leads a life in disquise
To this day he still sit's
And regrets every choice he made
He will he went after her
When he had his chance
He will pray she comes back
He will hope they're together
He will wish the best for her
He will hope she forget's
He will hope her pain vanishes
Ans that she moves on, and goes forward
But he still regrets
For one last time the dove will visit
For one last time he'll gaze into its eye's
For a second he'll see but then the
Memorage will fade away and,
He will realize that the love of his life
Did come come, she did return
She would only allow him to see what he would believe
And each time proven pointless
She came back repeatedly, and tried,
To show him
To make him see
That she is there for him
That she loves him and alway's has
And alway's will be by
His side watching
As he will change
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Awsome
This poem brings tears to my eyes, Because it makes me realise how bad I hurt my wife, recently , And now I know just how much forgiveness I need from her, thank you for opening my eyes in your words..

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I love it alot, I would never have thought of comparing it to a dove. nice job

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This a a good poem, I like the flow and the pain of this piece just jumps out at you. Like the other one I see a few miss spellings but other then that great write.



