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Not Finished [(in the least)]

I'd do it all for you, babe
if you'd just be my reason
my reason for breathing
my reason for getting up in the morning
I'd do it all for you, babe
just let me touch you
I'd do it all for you

Author notes

just a thought... dont know where to go with this yet

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Don't comment, it's not done

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  • Silverone
    June 5, 2007
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    Very good


  • Myth Of Twilight
    June 5, 2007
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    sweet you sead you needed points ill give you what i got and a few more great write as well dude


  • Dancing Marionette
    June 4, 2007

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    this a nice nice thought. good poem.
    and btw easiest way to get points on this site is to leave good comments on other peoples poems. [:


    • pointlessdayz
      June 5, 2007
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      that IS an easy way to get points... but it takes effort, which was not on my list of priorities at the time... actually, leaving comments on peoples work is fun!

  • maheo
    June 3, 2007

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    I remember feeling that way, this is an interesting picture into how much of yourself you give in a relationship eh?

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