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What A Poem Can Not Explain

Do you know how much I love you?
More than any words can show
These silly words, meant to be true
The same silly ones you already know

How can I put on this page
What words can not explain
Wrinkled up, and torn with age
Just a poem, simple and plain

Love is so much more
Than anything I can write
A feeling of adore
And thinking of you all night

So what can I do to make you see
Exactly how much you mean to me?

Author notes

This is a sonnet I wrote for my English class.. Teacher said it was the best.. Now tell me what you think, please?! Of course, it's all true.. Even though it was for class.. Yup. :] I love you, Aaron!!

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  • otakuchick89
    May 5, 2007

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    AAAWWW!!!

    THAT'S SO CUTE!! I LUV IT!! And good word choice too!! LOL!! U 2 ARE JUST ADORIBLE!! Keep up the AMAZINGLY AWSOME WORK!!
    Ttyl!!
    Luvs!!


  • Little Miss Suicide
    May 3, 2007

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    im pretty sure he knows you love him lol

    the poem is beautiful tho i luv the word choice great write


  • Sidewalk-Rampage
    May 3, 2007

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    Oh Gee =]

    I think he already knows how much he means to you
    :]]
    this was amazing i like sonnet's
    especially from you.

    gahh love poems are so cute
    but they make me sad.
    :[
    :/

    i love youuu!!


  • - Injected Fear -
    May 3, 2007

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    =D Oh my goosh.. Thank you! I feel very special.. I mean.. There were like a bajillion things you coulda written about, and you wrote about your love for me =) That is very special. I love this sonnet thing! Hehe. Thank you, babe. I love you!