It hurts
I know
But please
Don't cry
You're hurting us
We want you to stop crying
More depressing than usual
You're tears are so sad
I'm not there to wipe them away
I'm sorry
But please,
Stop crying
You know he was a waste of time
He doesn't apreciate you
It's his fault
Not yours
So he should be crying
Not you
So please,
Don't cry
You're killing me inside
He's killing you inside
Throw him out of your heart
The hole won't patch easily
I know
But it will eventually
He says he needs a break from you?
Please!
You need a break from heartbreak
Please,
Don't cry
Author notes
Written for my best friend Ap and Rl.She's suffering heartbreak and it needs to stop.Please Arisa/Hinata don't cry anymore and put the blade down
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425 points, ended May 5, 2007, 3 entries
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wow
i relly love this
its good
thats how i felt a long time ago -
I really like this one t....it hit home and you know why, you just don't see it as much from me. I'm glad that you're comforting you're friends, you make me so proud...love you
big sis
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i love the way this poem went from a different angle. most peoms talk about the heartbreak and how much it hurt, but this one is from a 3rd person veiw, a freind of the heart-broken person. i thought that was neat.
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Cause it is me trying to comfort my best friend in rl and ap
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wow it;s really good!!
i was totally imagining it
i luv it how you're like saying hurry up and stop crying..but at the same time trying to comfort her
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So, I love this tribute, it is so heartfelt and caring, we feel the love of friendship coming through your words. I am happy you are there for her. Wondrful job and thanks for entering!
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i understand that i need help. his life is difficult right now and so is mine. i just miss him. but i can't stop my tears. i know that he loves me just as much as i love him.
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