Oh you write so well
The way you dance around makes me wonder
How is it you can do this
Putting youself out there for all to see
You scribe your words and move on
With grace
I am at a loss
For your talent bemuses me
Yes, my pen,
I love what you do
A contest entry
- Power, Placement, Perspective by JM Kenyon.
900 points, ended May 11, 2007, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great thoughts here. Sometimes, words see alien while at the computer and the old fashioned pen is the only way to get my thoughts flowing again, a magicval thing, the motions, the sound, the slight ripple in the feel of friction... Lovely write.
s and best wishes ~Genie~
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XD I like this one. It started me out thinking that someone had surely stolen your heart with their words and amazing talent, only to find out that you seem to be infatuated with your writing utensil!! =D This is certainly one of my favourites!!
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oh wonderful, at first i thought you were talking about a fellow poet...and wow ya left me breathless at the end, speaking so amazingly about your Muse..I bet shes a woman! lol
goos job;good luck!
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