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The Truth About Darkness

    Darkness is in Light,
    Light is in shadows.
    Happiness is in Fright,
    Fright is in gallows.
    When all these come together,
    Al theway through....
    Within good is evil,
    Within evil is truth.

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  • BrokenWings...Fly
    May 1, 2008

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    O>O

    whoa!!!!!! >.< i love this write.. im gonna bookmark it, kaaaay? seriously, you're wickid talented..

    love ya, jess


    and no, i dont agree with little feather. within good CAN be evil.. Good intentions can sometimes be for the wrong reason. Or the person with good intentions can have warped ideas of what is really "good". like someone who wants to kill off jews because he thinks it will better the world (hitler -.-) good intentions.

    tho it was bad... VERY bad.



    anyway.. good job


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    May 5, 2007
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    Welcome to allpoetry

    Evil is nothing more than lies and good cannot be evil. You have a few edits you need to make. the third to last line the first word should be all and you need a space between the and way. Short and really wrong but who can control what the mind thinks up.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy