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Sonnet 1

As words lay upon the page
I think of your sweet eyes.
I seem to just observe the stage
And think of lasting ties.

For you I would slay this soul of mine
Or give myself to hell.
If you committed greater crime
My heart could never tell.

Your hand rests upon my skin
You are the light of day
This love can melt away all sin
Forever upon you I shall lay.

Hold my wings and press me close
For out of men, I love you most.

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  • DemolitionRED
    August 29
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    yay mar!!! I love the last two lines.