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* Covered In Crisco *

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Septic thoughts, limitless to my minds desires ~

As I walk into the blackened halls of perversion,
a slight glimmer of light echoes off their demanding faces ~

 

   Their nocturnal eyes have adjusted to the dungeons darkness,
   I stumble to the right side of this skanky chamber ~

 

Holes are cut out for their engorged members to protrude outward,
hands outstretched to greet my virginal arrival ~
Demonic chords blare satan from the speakers hanging in the corners ~

 

   A hungry hand grabs my furry thigh as I steady my nimble nakedness,
   a collage of Masters, men in black leather, slap me to the side ~

 

I watch carefully as they pass me by, inspecting, gritting their teeth ~

I smell the stench of fresh burbon piss and the aroma of toy oils,
A slippery arm, covered in Crisco without a doubt, grabs my manhood  ~

 

   I continue inward through this irresistable fertile maze,
   the sounds of grunts and moaning capture the putrid air ~

 

A new door opens, tables of erotic tools displayed to entice foreplay,
men are clutching each other, stroking ones' own ~
Thumping walls and rattling chains around the next corner lasso my thoughts ~

 

   Do I continue?  Yes, of course, there is nothing I fear,
   the Sling holds its' prey in a bound, vunerable position ~

 

Toys of perverted men are used in accordance,

I stand, I kneel, I watch as I came to do with no shame ~
I'm confronted by Daddy, a man so big, so beautiful, hairy and broad ~

 

   I am not afraid, he is here to show me the way, yet, I feign resistance ~
   His huge greasy arms reach around and pull me close, closer, bonding as one ~

 

I hesitate, but just for a fraile moment,
I want him badly, it shows through the polluted darkness as
he pulls me toward his greedy mouth, his thick beard engulfing my speechless lips ~

 

   His lizard tongue entwines mine, we exchange our spit, I suckle and nurse on

   his desirable eraser titts, as one should do when you're with Daddy ~

 

His gloved, readied hand covers my already granite-hard crotch ~
He pushes my boyish shoulders down to the floor, his thick meat drips,
my drooling mouth engulfs his love rod, I am obliged to do as told ~

 

   Daddy pumps his farming equipment deep into my guts and plants his seed,

   I dare not miss a drop of his pearly essence ~

 

Daddy whispers for his tender meal to get in to the sling and prepare our bonding ~

He inserts his massive searching fingers, stretching, opening, pumping in birthing lube,

his clenched fist follows as my second sphincter gives way to his gentle deep thrusts ~

 

   I came without dominance, I shall leave submissive ~
   The darkness is no longer a shadow, but a light by which I see ~

 

I shall return to Daddy,
for it is He, that pleases Me ~

 

This Boy shall accommodate your pleasures Sir ~

Author notes

WARNING!!

 

ADULT CONTENT!!

 

Option # 10

 

First time Sex

 

 

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  • Celticmoon
    July 12, 2007

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    Bear,

    This is quite the eye opening write you have penned here. You certain have raised the temperature within this contest a few notches I would say How can one read such a piece as this and not find themself in need of a cold shower or some ice at LEAST! Thank you for entering and good luck!



    Blessings
    Bel


    • Arkbear gold member
      July 13, 2007
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      My Dear Bel ~

      Get some ice....let's have a Toast!

      Cold showers are......soooooooo........cooold ~

      Let's keep it HOT in here!

      Thanks for the review my Dear ~



      Bear ~


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    July 4, 2007

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    I must admit, I have never read anything like this before, and I think you have done a most incredible job with this. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you.

    **Master Ktulu**


  • B Chandler
    June 21, 2007
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    MAYBE


  • Whoochi gold member
    May 15, 2007
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    WOOOOHOOOOO! BIG Bear *hugz* to you, winning this has special meaning to me...ya know what i mean ....yippee...Congrats! XOXOXOXO


  • BabyDut
    May 14, 2007

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    Just at an aww

    It was a great piece, I have been opened to reading thinkgs like such, and have not let it become offending, this was great the detail the wording, and everything, made me quever in some sort not sure, how, but the work you have done was great.
    *~Baby~*


  • Robin Candor
    May 10, 2007

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    Outstanding

    I made a decision a long time ago that those things in my heart which violated a child's innocence would never enter my writing. You on the otherhand have made a choice that your penmanship will allow anything and everything to be fair game. I am not wrong and neither are you. My choice was made not due to my righteousness, but due to the concern that whatever I penned would be available to those that follow after me. I own secrets deeper and darker than my pen will ever tell. Am I a hypocrite for choosing to conceal their telling? Perhaps. However, I was once again by this writing placed in the position of saying, "What if I were your child"? How would this make me feel, just knowing my Father had written it? "I came without dominance, I shall leave submissive", why? Because the flesh rules me? This poem is indeed powerful. It is well thought out. It delivers in every line. Yet, it delivers what? Strength over our carnal nature? I believe not. Power over that which seeks to rule us? No! I ask you only because it is so good, what was I to take away in my climb toward my last heartbeat? You reply, "I'm not dead yet and I want to live every moment." To fulfill whose goal? Yours, God's, your family's. One thing is certain my poetic friend, we will leave a legacy and in it we will decide if we were something worth following, or something that gravitated to our own desires. Great piece. RC


  • GiveMeTheGun
    May 4, 2007

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    nice

    i really liked this, and that's all i shall say. that, and the picture you chose for this write was perfect.


  • -Ink Artist-
    May 3, 2007
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    I'm speechless...


    ~Lori


  • soldiersoul gold member
    May 3, 2007

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    oooooh lord figgers ole BEARBUTT would b the last poem to critique lol...sounds like the ...illumiNAUGHTY ...i dunno tho i might let them keep their secrets this round lol...good luck bub


  • FisherCat
    May 2, 2007

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    Brother Bear,

    I am at a loooooss for words! Not sure what I was expecting when I clicked, but I don't think this was it, however, it is a great read! Best of luck in the contest. Keep that pen flowing.

    Love

    Brother Cat

    • Arkbear gold member
      May 3, 2007
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      Brother Cat ~

      Sorry if I caught you off guard ~

      Your Brother just likes to have a bit of fun every now & then ~

      Brother Bear ~

  • Whoochi gold member
    May 2, 2007

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    In my field, the sling is for a broken arm..lol..seriously Bear, the title alone lured me into this definitely slick piece...I love ya Good luck in his contest, hes a HARD one to plEASE...i love ya both anyway and am sure proud to know you!

    • Arkbear gold member
      May 3, 2007
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      Whooch ~

      Glad ta know you can relate to a sling ~

      Proud ta know you as well sweet thing ~

      Bear ~

      PS...Yeah....my instincts told me what I was *UP* against when I met the Big Guy ~

      I can tell he's one hell of a man ~

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