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Prince Luharl

On a Silver Wind he Flys
Onxy and Cream Wings Beat with Joy
His Hazel nut Eyes Look at the World with Wisedom

Luharl,
The Prince Of The Sky
King Of The Wind.

He Spins and Dives
Sunlight Dances on his Wing Tips
Clonds Splash the Blue Kingdom

His Cries are know Through Out the Lands
His Name Wispered in aw
A Slate Tinted Cloke covers his back




Luharl,

My fethered Friend.

Author notes

Luharl is a falcan who is liveing near by, he fly by me alot, close enough to reach out and touch him!!! he's amazeing!!!

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  • WhollySurrendered
    May 5, 2007

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    The imagery and wording in this piece were incredible. This was a great poem, very descriptive and attention grabbing. Excellent work, good luck!


  • HaleyMary
    May 3, 2007
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    Beautiful. I liked the imagery in this piece. Good description of the bird. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.