When he smiles,
I get all giggly,
When he laughs,
My heart goes swoon,
When he walks towards me,
My stomach tightens,
When he talks,
I have a big grin plastered on my face,
When he winks,
My breath catches,
When he nods,
I always nod back,
When he leans towards me,
I lean closer,
When he talks to me,
I ignore everything else in fear that I'll miss something,
When he looks at me,
My world suddenly becomes beautiful.
A contest entry
- Remind Me of the One I Love by Dlvvanzor.
1200 points, ended October 16, 2007, 20 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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That was so sweet and cute! I could see a girl giggling. Actually, I could see myself giggling and making a fool out of myself.
Great write, thanks for entering,
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thanks.
I'm glad you liked it.
e♥
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this is soooo good.. i love it

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Thanks.

peace♥funka_da_ryley---
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I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its so sweet and pretty!!!!!!!!!!!!!Bravo!!!!!!!!!!
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What a sweet poem to read first thing in the morning!
Nice flow and sweet thoughts.
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Thanks.

peace♥riley---
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