The rain makes people sad,
but it makes me glad
becouse it washs away the flith of to day
Tomaro will be better but it never is, that's just a myth.
A Duet Would Be Nice.
But who in thire right mind
would take the time to sing with me?
All A Alone I keep on treading stone.
Perhaps one day I'll collaps.
All A Alone I keep on treading water.
Perhaps oneday I'll cross somebodys path.
The Sun it makes people happy,
which is realy kind of sappy,
but it makes me feel crappy.
Author notes
I was walking in the rain to day and i was kind of sad so i started to sing, i like it.
Please tell me what you think
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Good song. Rain makes me sad, too. You can check out my song "Rainy Day Blues" if you want to see how sad I was that it was raining and couldn't go outside. This poem had a good flow and showed emotion. I liked this poem. Keep writing.
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to arzab
i like the rain, makes me feel happy, the sun is out so much that it's not so sepcel anymore...but it looks nice. =3
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