A breath within a song
Take nothing that I say
Hold nothing that I touch
See nothing I gaze
A breath a song
A wave within time
Age is nothing but a passage
A cut into the darkness
What we once loved
What was once amongst us
Take nothing I say
Hold nothing I touch
Today is nothing more then yesterday's tomorrow
Death is all around us
Blood and Chaos
Needles of pain
And all I can see
All that I touch
A word I say
Love is but a fear
A fear one shields from the light
A darkness within oneself
All I can see
All that I touch
All that is good
All that is bad
Take nothing I say
Hold nothing for the pain
Loss of memories
Lost within thee
Lost within thy self
A breath within a song
A breath a song
Hold me now
Fear is forgotten
Memories of past
Present and future
All is never lost
I see more then the vision
I see more within thee light
Hold and feel
Bad is sometimes the only way
The only path to the good
Take all that I say
Hold all that I touch
Forever is nothing more then all of our todays
A contest entry
- ANY THING by serenity silvermoon.
430 points, ended May 10, 2007, 145 entries
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that was beautiful and thank you for taking the time to read my poem
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Your very welcome..
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interesting. very surreal. i'm not quite sure i know what your talking about in it, but that doesn't really matter anyway. that's poetry for ya. ^_^ good luck on the contest!
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It's depression actually that I was talking about.. How when one feels that if you so much as look at me then your world will become dark and bad like how one feels at times.. But dispite all that what one forgets is that in times of great depression what one really needs most of all is the touch of a friend to know and let it be known that things will get better.. So I suppose it is a poem about self awarness that there is always something good even when it looks like the world is crumbling for you..
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gosh...i feel like such a heal now for not understanding. i hope this is not how you feel right now. if it is...i'm sorry i haven't been there for you like i should. i can be quite the fool sometimes. ::hugs::
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Nono.. I am fine.. A little worried but nothing to do with you.. Lilley the baby horse was brought to the vet yesterday due to something wrong with her leg.. We think Stacey her mom stepped on her but that means now both Stacey and the baby are gone and I just really miss them.. Even if the baby gets better I don't think they are comming back to us..
As for not understanding the poem, My poetry is just like Zodiac and Tarot cards.. They can be read in so many ways and so many definitions.. This is what the poem speaks to me.. What it speaks to you may be completely differant.. No feeling like the heal.. **Pokes a smile out of you** -
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aw, i'm sorry dear. i will say a prayer about the horse for you. why do you think you won't get her back even if she gets better? i just hope all is well for her and that she is able to be healed well.
and i guess i know what you mean. my poetry is often ambiguous, and i suppose that's the way its meant to be. then everyone can have a part in it, be it through their interpretation or the authors. ::smiles for you because you make her smile::
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**Me is a very happies that I make you giggle for sure.. Oh year, I left you a message on your MySpace awsering machine..
Thank you.. For your prayer.. Stacey came to us from a good friend who was not using her cause she was bred.. She was brought to us for companionship for our horse Keirnan after his father died last July.. I knew from the start that she was not our horse but she became a loved part of the family.. So I fear that when baby gets better or what ever happens Stacey is gonna go back to her home cause she will be bred again in July/August.. Stacey's owner was talking about bring down another mare to keep Keirnan company.. But I have mixed feelings.. I want Keinan to be happy but in the same I miss Stacey allot and I dun know.. I fear I will get attached to the new mare (Who also is pregnate) And we will go through the very same thing all over again.. It's a happy/sad mixure of mess right now.. Very mixed feelings.. -
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oh, i see. i understand now. that has to be hard, having to function as the breeders and get attached to them so that you have to say goodbye when the "deed has been done".
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Yeah, Don't get me wrong.. Harold is a very nice man and he loves everyone of his horses and we could not have asked for a nicer ferrier (He clips Keirnan's feet for us..) He let us 'borrow' if you may Stacey to help Keirnan cause he knew we could not afford to buy another horse.. nd I understand that Stacey cause of her joint issue can not be a work horse that he needs as he is in the horse business so she is a brood mare to earn her keep.. I understand this is his business and I knew from the ghetto that eventually she would have to leave.. Still it does not make it much easier.. But from what I am hearing if Lilly does pull through she will not be sold.. For that I am happy which means I will be able to go to his farm to visit her and Stacey.. That makes it a little easier.. But As I am in the dog business I understand what breeding means.. I went through the very same thing when it was time for Tah's puppies to go to their new homes.. I am just glad I decided to save up so I could buy Raven and always have one of the puppies of my own.. But a horse is another story.. They are way to high in price for me to try and buy one not to mention it is not pratical..
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I Hear You
The past is the platform for the future. The totality of our todays. Deep, thoughtful write, filled with essence.
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