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Diana, Queen of Hearts

A lady sitting on her throne
Looking regal but cruel
Seemingly heartless

Days go by on and on
People harshly beheaded
The reputation grows

Everyone knows about
The queen of hearts
And says that she has none

Her hair black as night
Thin and tall like an elf
Eyes sharp as a sword

But reflecting her
Lonliness and sadness
Mind numb with pain

She curses Fate for
Putting her there
And wishes she had died

Instead of her love
Her beloved of late
Continually mourning

He was beheaded
By the queen before her
And here she is

Sitting on her throne
Killing other people
Without a choice

Grieving inside
Feeling the guilt
Taking the blows

Wanting to die
To escape her destiny
To be with her love

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  • xXxbecca10o8o7xXx
    May 11, 2007
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    really nicely written...good luck in the contest


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    May 7, 2007
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    A realy good piece Good Luck in the Contest.


  • BabyBun silver member
    May 3, 2007

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    Sorry the conest closed before you had a chance to enter. This was an interesting and unexpected takeon the title. I enjoyed it very much! I have another contest that I have just opened so please check it out!