I love the way you smile at me,
I love the way you say my name,
I love the way your fingers linger,
I love the way that we're the same.
I look forward to you every day,
I live for you,
I breath for you,
And I want this to stay true.
You keep me in line,
You keep me sane,
You keep me loving you,
You shelter me in the rain.
When i am sad,
You comfort me,
When I don't get it,
You help me too see.
Your my sunshine,
On a stormy day,
Your the joy,
In all I say.
Don't leave,
Just love me,
Love me forever,
And forever we shall be.
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Option 8
A contest entry
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This was intimate, cute, && sweeet! Loved it! Good luck in the contest!
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i love this poem i had to read it twice to rally get the flow thow but once i really cought hold of it it flows quite nicely, thanks for entering and good luck
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This is a very awesome poem that sums up how much that special person means to you. Best of luck in the contest. James.
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Beautiful.
Painted a lovely picture of love in my mind. I loved it.
Well done!
Best of luck and thanks for entering.
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I really like this. it was a little painful to read for me because I remember saying this and it didn't turn out to be forever. I came up about forever short on that one. But I love this it is very well written and beautiful...
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I know what you mean. thanx
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Awwww !
This is just beautiful
It flowed and rhymed perfectly. Well done and best of luck 
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