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free as a breeze flying through the trees

over the valley so green

high in the sky just under the clouds

i weave and soar in between

 

down to the river bed i follow the stream

watching the fish below

clear is the water that glistens in the sun

turning everything around it aglow

 

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i rise to the sky and soar over the farms

the sights i see are impressive to me

the way nature forms the picturesque sights

is beyond human belief

while flying high in the sky all around me is serene

it's such a great pleasure

to float in the breeze and let the wind be your guide

it makes the world seem so small

and my imagination so wide

 

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out of sight i fly to follow my dreams

leaving memories and past behind

soar as i might through the darkest night

higher and  higher i climb

 

 

 

 

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  • michael thomas gold member
    October 1, 2007
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    Good.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    September 2, 2007
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    very vivid and alluring mary.may i fly with you..smile xx pp


  • Beanbiscuit
    July 20, 2007

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    This one is so positive and inspiring! The words of chasing freedom can make the reader's soul soar with the author's. It's out of a beautiful mind.

    • amysticwriter silver member
      July 21, 2007
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      thank you for your comment and applause...this is one of my personal favorites...


  • drybones
    May 7, 2007

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    Excellent

    Since you were kind enough to vist my page and comment on a number of my songs, I though I would return the favor. I was pleased to find this gem. It is beautifully crafted and the imagery is exceptional. Well done.

    • amysticwriter silver member
      May 7, 2007
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      Love your comment,glad you like the poem, thanks for the applause...BB


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    May 3, 2007

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    Wow this is great!
    I love the imagery that you chose
    for this piece. Well done and thank
    you for your entry in my contest!
    I appreciate it and wish you the
    best of luck with it here. Keep up
    the great work here!



    Jeremy0826

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