Perfection doesn’t even leave room to breathe,
An ounce of relaxation can lead to complete disaster,
And the big ideas of tiny people can result in absence of nutrition.
Issues have never been so Vogue
And scars have become a trend.
Chocolate ice-cream becomes the devil [in the flesh]
Caring parents turn into enemies.
Nothing is right,
And the girl in the mirror
doesn’t look as thin as I did yesterday.
So I’ll purge.purge.purge
And fall on and over these twosizestoobig jeans
-drowning in a hoodie from last season-
Yearning for another
city.light head trip
pupils dilated by the intensity of adrenalin
and the lack of common sense
(unless common sense is knowing who to go to for what)
Chemical reactions
Turn to late night conversations
[terribly gorgeous lies]
Author notes
x.one last fix.x
A contest entry
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'Chocolate ice-cream becomes the devil [in the flesh]
Caring parents turn into enemies.
Nothing is right,
And the girl in the mirror
doesn’t look as thin as I did yesterday.
So I’ll purge.purge.purge
And fall on and over these twosizestoobig jeans
-drowning in a hoodie from last season-'
love those lines ^^^^^ great poem good luck in my contest =] -
Perfection doesn’t even leave room to breathe,
An ounce of relaxation can lead to complete disaster,
And the big ideas of tiny people can result in absence of nutrition.
Issues have never been so Vogue
And scars have become a trend.
daymn bb doll
this is amazing!!!
I love the way your lines are like harsh statements
and the truth and imagery!
La.LOVE IT!!!
you are an amazing poet!
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