It'll be okay
No don't fall asleep
Look at me, honey look at me
You've got to keep drinking
More water
Honey look up at me
It'll be okay
We'll get through this
No trips to the hospital
Not this time, not again
I won't lose you
Just look at me
It'll be okay
Take another sip
Tell me darling what day is it?
Tell me darling whose room are we in?
Please tell me it'll be okay
Please tell me you remember who I am
I know you're not that sick
You'll make it sweetheart
Please honey
Look at me
Tell me you're okay
It'll all be okay
Author notes
it's about my best friend Kayla, she was really really dehydrated on a missions trip, and was shaking really hard, and sobbing and feverish, and the works u know? we were scared we'd have to take her to a doctor. anyway hope u like. oh and she was okay after a couple hours.
rae
Written July 23rd, 2003
A contest entry
- Past Memories by SilverxXxShadow.
250 points, ended July 24, 2003, 27 entries
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Well, that's good that she got better. Sometimes I believe that your words of comfort can really make a person feel better. Sadly, it always doesn't work though. Well, this was a nice write. Thank you for entering my contest...good luck.
~Shadow
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