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You

Youve shown me something thats made me click,
taught an old dog a brand new trick.

You got rid of my sickness,
done away with my fear,
you helped me wipe away the tears.

You've made me feel things ive never known
and set me and my life all aglow.

How i wish this to never end,
through the dark i can now comprehend.

I love you my baby
please never depart
and i want you to know
that i love you..with all of my heart.

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  • movedon
    May 3, 2007
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    cuteeeeeee! I loved it! Que bonita!


  • Shadow-Syndrome
    May 3, 2007

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    aww this is such a sweet poem. i love the way it rhymes. and theres alot of emotion here. you can feel it when you read it.

    - katie

  • Amanda 88
    May 3, 2007
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    very touching poem!! you did a great job! take care and have a great day!


  • Stevie17Marie
    May 3, 2007
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    awwww

    how touching this is very cute

    stevie


  • Emosie Vloei
    May 3, 2007

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    Nothing like finding that special someone that just takes you to another level.Healing past hurts while bringing in new joy.Very nice ode to a love


  • The FeliX
    May 3, 2007
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    very simple and sweet

    Felix

  • What a beautiful poem. Whoever this poem for, that person should feel very proud. I know i would


  • JUGULAR vain
    May 3, 2007
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    i hope the person you love, lovesd you to


  • Under The Rainbow
    May 2, 2007
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    awww! that's well pretty. *wipes away tear*
    love you x

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