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The rules

When I first wake up
i try to keep my balance
and race towards the computer

And all throughout the day
I try to stay alive
I try my best....but it's school

Finally the day's over
I am truly relieved
But don't make me go to bed!!!!

A contest entry

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  • phoenixonfire
    May 3, 2007

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    lmao That was kinda weirdly funny...but I like the cheeky tone that said dont make me go back to school!!
    lol!!

    Loved it

    Thanks for entering and good luck!! Keep smiling!!

    preets


  • twlike2012
    May 2, 2007
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    that was good keep writing young poet