My intake of breath
As you bat your eyes
The scent on your neck
Will be my demise.
Your chin I lift up
As our eyes align
They close softly
And God stops time
In this embrace
As he looks from above
John Lennon repeats
"All we need is love."
Please tell me what you think
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This one was very cool!
Great work soft and sweetly sensual.
~Lisa~
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Thank you, I often think of sugar during a kiss.
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I think the second stanza is very rich and real. Lovely.
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Awwww !
This is just beautiful. Well done
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Nice
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Thanx I just joined today. You are my first comment!!!
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