man believes he's an evil seed
all consumed by an evil need
possessed with an evil greed
he pursues then the evil deed
obsessed with the evil in all
considering himself too small
to do much other than to fall
he rolls himself up in a ball
believing that he's to be doomed
for a beast he must be groomed
as he waits then to be consumed
in his ignorance he is entombed
Please tell me what you think
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Rose!
Its great to see you post a poem again! I love the monorhyme in each stanza! It makes the poem very tight and reads very well. There is alot of wisdom in your words and you get the message across nicely. great write my friend and I hope to see you on here more. You've been missed! 
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