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Glow

And so it begins...
The heavy night of yesterday
Has peeled into something new
So fresh feet soaked in dew

I walk out into the morning
And feel the glow
Not only from the sun, sea and land
But radiating from summer lovers hand in hand

And the taste of salty lips
Hair wild with wind and sea swimming
With suncream silken hands
Encrusted with jewels of sand

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  • HannahBrookeXD
    May 13, 2007

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    "With suncream silken hands
    encrusted with jewels of sand"

    This is so gorgeous and descriptive! Wonderful job with this poem!