We did everything
that couples do
when i said i love you
you said i love you to
when you said i love you
you said you meant forever
but did you know
that actually you meant never
because where are you now
not here with me
and its killin me, the truth i have to seek
when you said you wanted me back
i didnt realize truth is what it lacked
I hope your happy with that bitch
the one i hate so much it makes me twitch
i hope you live happy forever
or as you say
Never.
Author notes
Remember How You Said You'd Love Me Forever..? Well I Think Forever Just Ended.
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600 points, ended May 3, 2007, 12 entries
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ouch - this has a vicious tone to it:
I hope your happy with that bitch
i hope you live happy forever
or as you say
Never.
nice
well done and good luck
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