Its time to make you cry.
keep a serious face.
Don't you dare laugh
Or my tiny heart will break.
Your tears will start to fall
from just one word on this page.
I shall now utter the word
and then all hell will break.
....................poop....................
HEY I DIDN'T SAY THEY WOULD BE TEARS OF SADNESS!
Author notes
JUST FOR YOU ASHLEY! it took me five min. to come up with this. enjoy and i hope i win
A contest entry
- Show me watcha Got!! by agalford7053.
600 points, ended June 1, 2007, 35 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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HARDY HAR HAR
I guess you did make me laugh. No tears however, but I did laugh. Its nice not to be able to predict the outcome.
Great job!
God Bless,
Ashley
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hey i like this its original. it is like a threat i guess my poem i mean lol.i was going thro a bad time then. im a peacefull guy really lol
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hah
love it
didnt not see that coming
great write
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Lmao... on any other occasion I might have called this interestingly immature but it is for a contest so... GREAT JOB.. nice little shocker at the end.
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