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sunsets

As we layed on the ground,
you looked at me and said goodnight,
as the sunset fades away and your eyes close,
as the stars come out and the moon shines on your pretty face.

You smile before you fall asleep,
that smile that fills my heart with pain,
pain because I know that this can't last,
you can't handle this, us, keeping love a secret.

So I lay next to you one last time,
the last time i'll see you like this,
happy with me, touching your face as you sleep gracefully.
such soft skin, teasing me and inviting me to come closer.

Your cuddled around me holding me close,
and i'm wondering if I should kiss your forehead.
Your sensitive to my touch, for this is the last time you'll feel it
and when tomarrows sunset comes, i'll be gone.





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  • tutie7
    May 3, 2007
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    oh... this reeks of goodbyes! so sad and our conversations yesterday.... oh sadness. i hate goodbyes. my friend used to make me c-ya! she would get mad if i said bye.

    anyway my favorite part- kiss on the forehead. love that. it is a completely romantisized piece.