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Sorry

I'm sorry I wasn't there for you
When you needed me the most
I'm sorry I didn't listen to you
When you needed it the most
I'm sorry I pushed you away
When all's you needed was love
I'm sorry we couldn't exchange one last thing
You mean everything to me
Even though you are gone now
I still think about you
Day and night no matter what
I still say I love you

Author notes

I wrote this poem about 3 years ago and I believe it was to my boyfriend at the time.

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  • youreaddictivex3
    May 17, 2007

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    I like it because it captures an aspect of loss.
    It's really sad, though.
    My favorite line is... "Day and night no matter what I still say I love you"
    Beautifully written, keep it up.


  • anguish
    May 4, 2007
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    very nice, keep up the good work, Anguish


  • WinE-reDpuddles
    May 2, 2007

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    aww its a really sweet poem... im glad u kept it or i wudnt have been able to read it! sad... but kinda bitter sweet...


  • DiamondGirl
    May 2, 2007

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    Love the poem...those are the words i always wanna say tp my ex...but they just wont come out..reallly nice work


  • The Cube
    May 2, 2007

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    Wonderful. Appology poems are always a good escape to help get out a feeling we hide inside. Great work!

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