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Will You

Will you come with me
if I say your name?
Will you follow me
although life would
never be the same?
will you leave your past
if I whispered your name?
Will you be cruel or kind
as my love I proclaim?
Will you always love me
and go where I want to go?
Will you leave your friends
to go where you don't know?
Will you stay with me
as I reshape your world?
Because I will stay with you,
as my love is unfurled.

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  • Samantha-.
    May 2, 2007

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    WOW! I loved this one. It was so meaningful and sweet. The rhyming was awesome I loved the first five lines. They just flowed so well. Great job!!! Good luck!!!

    • Dee23
      May 3, 2007
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      doreen H

      Thanks for your kind comment Means a lot.