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Insperation

 Insperation is sought
and found
from a person
no where near
yet always in my heart
She gave me life
offered support
a true friendship
thicker than the blood
that binds us
Now as I think
about her
and all that she gave me
I just hope that someday
I'll be as good

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  • LordChronic
    May 4, 2007
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    i think moms are thicker then the tickness in blood. Crazynesss sometimes


  • ButterflyforChrist
    May 2, 2007

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    A great tribute to your mom! =) I bet she'll love it!

    One thing I will point out is that inspiration is spelled with and "i" after the "P" not "e"

    Great job!