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Lunchbox

A soft roll, cheese and pickle
Because that's that was left in the cupboard.
An shining apple, green and crisp
Because the papers say we must.
A packet of crisps, favorite flavour,
Because we've been good this week.
A pink youghurt, without the bits
Because that's the way we like it.

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Mmmmmmm Lunch

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  • Phthonos
    June 17, 2007
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    *laugh*

    Fantastic. Though now I'm hungry.
    No matter. It's still great. n_n


  • Dragon-Tearz13
    June 14, 2007
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    great idea!!

    I love this poem. Writing about a lunch, who would have thought? Right on!!


  • DeIndian4444
    June 14, 2007
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    hahahaha, this is soo cute. i never thought about writing about lunch. : P sounds good!!! this would be a really cute like child poem, to go on like a lunchbox, or shirt, or high chair or something. ohh and btw, thanks for your comment on "Mother?", you seemed to have understood it very good; : )thanks


  • Freedom comes
    May 3, 2007

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    awwww reminds me of primary school too, and we weren't allowed to take i chocolate lol. It's sweet. xxx


  • Vicky Shwepps
    May 2, 2007
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    aww, reminds me of primary school! lol


  • Olivias Violin
    May 2, 2007
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    cute

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