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Notion

There exists
A notion
Notion that I care
Perhaps several notions then
I think
Also the notion that I am
Psychic
Totally able to predict the future
And perhaps the present also
But maybe that’s not psychic
But remote viewing instead
I see a missile launch site
It’s being constructed
Here are the coordinates
Or maybe that’s drugs
Either on or off
Not sure
Just a notion
But we cycle round
And my favorite remains
Notion that I care

Author notes

This is a random word generator inspired poem.

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  • Glasyalabolas
    October 22, 2007

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    This piece is a very odd notion (I know, I know), but it works well within it's randomness. Random pieces are always good when they work well and don't seem forced or contrived, and this piece is neither.

    Good write.


  • Despairkitty
    May 2, 2007

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    I think this is great Lexa!! I could see a bit of the bipolar in this one. Clever monkey...
    Despair