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What If

What if I told you,
I threw away everything we had,
That all those sappy love lines were lies,
That all those times I said my feeling wouldn't change,
I lied, because they already had,
What if I said,
Every "rumor" you heard were true,
What if I came clean,
And told you about all the hours I spent with him,
All the times I lied,
How I never really knew what I wanted,
Would you be able to love,
Would you be able to trust,
Now you see why,
I have such a hard time trusting,
And I know I love you,
Im just scared,
About what you might tell me



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  • heartpour
    May 16, 2007

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    Indeed, the "what ifs" of our life could really change everything! It is really difficult sometimes to completely put your trust on someone... Poem nicely done!

  • this is good

    I love this poem it has a nice flow to it. I doubt, unlike everyone else that commented, that this is based off ur life but i could be wrong.

  • PalmettoSky
    May 2, 2007
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    I like the way this twisted toward the end...I would encourage you to love anyway...Loving is your gift to yourself...I learned recently (finally) that there is no pain great enough to justify holding myself back from love...It is always worth it...You are worth it! peace and light, Kendal