Don’t quit, keep on moving
Just try to keep on living
Life isn’t fair
It doesn’t care
If you fall down, the world keeps spinning
If you get shot, the war keeps raging
That’s the way the world rolls
It doesn’t stop, it just goes
So don’t quit, keep on moving
Just try to keep on living
A contest entry
- Let It All Out by BeautifulDisaster9.
525 points, ended May 10, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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a good positive piece here, aye to don't quit, we never know what is about to come into our lives to greet us
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Well done.
Simple, but good message here. I liked this part the best:
"If you fall down, the world keeps spinning
If you get shot, the war keeps raging
That’s the way the world rolls
It doesn’t stop, it just goes"
But overall, nice job.
Thanks for entering and best of luck!
<3BeautifulDisaster9
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