Hear the crys,
See the pain,
Feel the hurt,
My color is red,
Oh how it hurts
A contest entry
- Appealing Colors, Darkened Souls by EatYourSunlight.
300 points, ended May 16, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Hmm, a good short piece in a tribute to the color red. I see you took the color as pain. Perhaps blood? I ususally see red as rage or death. Good job and good luck in the contest you entered.
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Ya, it is like blood, thanx you =].
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