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Pretty Poison.

A brush of the arm,
Is that all it takes?
To have old and lost feelings,
Come r u s h i n g back to my veins.

A quick glance of the eyes,
Covered in cheap glitter.
That I used to melt in.
Cause my heart to c r u m b l e again.

I stare at your painted lips,
That I used to kiss.
They curve into a smile,
And I seem to be f a l l i n g back into your embrace.

Why do I feel your pretty poison?
Creeping back into my system.
Just one more addiction,

[[I can't give up.]]

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  • purple wings
    May 12, 2007

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    great write.i battle with my adiction to mary jane on a weekly basis,she was my first love its so hard to let go next to muse ic she was my second and better for me i suppose.keep up the good work.


  • aloneintheworld
    May 8, 2007
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    nice

    nice one keep it up


  • Dresden
    May 3, 2007
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    i get the feeling.

    it's nothing to do with heroin at all.


  • Despairkitty
    May 2, 2007

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    Nice darling. I loved the words with the extra spaces in each stanza. Wonderful effect.
    Despair


  • facesofnatalia
    May 2, 2007
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    natalie, darling, all these heroin poems are very depressing. i <3 you.

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